Ramia-Yana

[Kyuhau]

Solid start so far, curious as to how it goes from here

 

[Snake95]

Made an account just to comment here.
Excited to see how the story goes.

 

[Treswimming]

@Ayreos Dude we barely have a chapter to go off of lol.

 

[aceina]

this is loosing me as we still have no plot and you just made a joke out of a attempted rape

 

[Ldark]

oh that was really good!!! He took the lap pillow!!! who could have resisted that! oh boy that was from 0 to 100 in just a few minutes, the guy almosts dies! I really like the story so far.

 

[merkletr33]

Good job TGS! It was a nice read

 

[Dr-Game]

i like the art-style a lot.

 

[Avarice]

So far so good and the pacing isn't bad either - closer to a novel.

 

[SonicSonedit]

Hey, thats pretty good

 

[Ayreos]

Oh noo, tentacles.

 

[Kurbo]

Love the design of MC, but the pacing seems a bit rushed

 

[Mizumachi]

@Kurbo
I disagree. The hero is still investigating the very same first conflict.

 

[Guyincognitus]

The writing is so incredibly generic I feel like I won't remember anything as soon as I click off the page. If you're gonna make power fantasy shlock at least do one interesting thing. And no I'm not counting big boobs.

 

[SonicSonedit]

This is really awesome so far, very unusual story makeup

 

[readerotaku123321]

The artstyle is good, but...
I dont really understand why its tagged as sexual violence if there hasnt been any so far... Literally everything censored...
I mean... If the manga is supposed to be for adults, there shouldnt be any censorship at all. #FuckCensorship

 

[grimlight]

Its pretty good pacing could use a bit of work though

 

[brimstonezv]

I'm not even mad

 

[Popbomber69]

I need more of this

Someone make wholesome content of this

 

[4skinsandwich]

WAIT THIS THE DUDE THAT MAKES THE BOMB ASS OPM FANART

 

[maloss]

I love it!