Reincarnated as a Side Character?! - Ch. 2 - The afterlife

[MangaDex]

 

[homeworkChan]

I think the artist should make their line art more smooth,right now you can see that it’s drawn very sketchy.You should just,add another layer and then redo the line art,to make it more clean,I also recommend learning how to draw a good background,since everything here is out of place

 

[Kaarme]

The art reminds me more of Chinese style moe art than Japanese. Such as Love Never Fails. But of course it's just my personal impression.

 

[Simpleton]

MC was fairly young herself, she should have known kids are strong and agile, just not remembered?

(On the other hand, if she grew up in a city and didn't get to play around or climb trees a lot, then I guess she might not even have known.)