@boyd If I understand correctly then I agree with @ImHungry. I obviously don't speak for everyone, but IMO you should put your money to better use based on the quality.
You really need a proof reader. It's wayyy better than what you've started with but there's still a lot of work to do to reach good quality translations.
@cancerverse At least he's not a bad guy about it?
I mean, grooming is awful but in this case she's clearly better off staying with him and he's proven himself to be a stand-up guy about those he sleeps with.
Also, it has no weight whatsoever because she's a kid but she clearly wouldn't have minded him going Pedo, I'm just saying it'd be ever so slightly better than nonconsensual sex.
Plus, these are the middle ages. With a life expectancy of 40, 13 is the new 18