Rokudou no Onna-tachi - Vol. 16 Ch. 134 - Amori And Harikura

@Stan-Miller
Dude, ask Greg what the fuck is up with this chapter. I thought you guys got sniped it's so bad. Not even 4 pages in and it's loaded with ESL grammar.
What happened?
 
@N1Degenerate Yakuza boss? Impossible. I think you mistook Yakuza and normal gang. They are different, similar to how a Mafia family is different from a gang in the US. Yakuza isn't all about violence and street fight. You can only become Yakuza boss if you join a Yakuza and pledge toyalty to the group then gain enough achievements and trust so that the Oyabun would pass his position to you. Someone like Rokudou won't join a Yakuza group by his own will. Moreover, there is a different between teenager gangs and the Yakuza.
 
And now Rokudo takes his next step in the conquest of all of Japan
 
@DrWhoCares
Going to try review the proofed scripts a second or third time from now. Won't be able to amend with all my past mistakes for every chapter, but will definitely continue to work on it.

Edit: Feel free to message me any mistakes I may have missed.
 
So he's going to have two school's worth of girls, hot damn busy nights ahead.
 
@Greg_no_Gregory Aye, if I didn't have to go to bed, and now I didn't have to go to work, I would.
Also I didn't know your mangadex account so I didn't @ you directly.
When I get home I'll point out the issues I saw.
 
Raino is so fucking cute. We all know who Rokudou is gonna end up with in the end, but I wish it was Raino
 
What a lie. Mainly because of India and China, there's a deficit in the female population in the world.
 
Aww Raino keeps a heart painted on her palm. I know she is not end game but damn if she is ’t the cutest girl by far.

>refrains from making chromosome puns
 
Kazeno looks like Dio Brando, like his first appearance

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