Sairin Yuusha no Fukushuu Hanashi - Vol. 1 Ch. 2

Rather have a reincarnated revenge story instead of a reincarnated hero harem story. Thanks for the translation, hope someone continues it.
 
> Did you notice Elphiszerk belly clothe design? Specifically the opening cut around her belly?
I really thought its like modelled to a d**k....
 
I remember this bad art...and the terrible story line...
I will give the mangaka credit for giving the female lead those full on villain claws though. That's at least a little original.
 
Amazing Grace, how sweet the sound; That saved a wretch like me!
I once was lost, but now am found; Was blind, but now I see!
 
You know I'm just going to write down my honest opinion a:
First of all, it's rushed, like very rushed to the point where on the 2nd chapter the MC has already found the core. Second the art could be given a few more touches as it seems rushed. Third add some more storyline, it feels that this is just a combination of every cliche part in revenge stories.
 

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