Second Life Ranker - Vol. 1 Ch. 8
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This is so good and exciting!!
Thanks for the chapter!
Thanks for the chapter!
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In the first two pages there are plenty of apostrophe mistakes.
Here is how you use apostrophes:
if you can say "it is" then the correct apostrophe is "it's".
Otherwise, you use "its", as in something belongs to it.
So, in the first description bubble, it is "its eyes", "its other senses" and "its usual moss" (and not it's).
In the reward bubble, there should not have been an apostrophe because this is just plural. just plural is just an s. You only have an apostrophe if there is a sense of belonging.
Here this is not case. "Depending on the number of monsters hunted"
Later on, you do the same mistake as at the start with another "it's" when it isn't warranted. "Its outer layer [also I would have used shell here because it fits better] is extremely (no dash here) durable.
Same mistake again: "There is only one site above its joint"
Here is how you use apostrophes:
if you can say "it is" then the correct apostrophe is "it's".
Otherwise, you use "its", as in something belongs to it.
So, in the first description bubble, it is "its eyes", "its other senses" and "its usual moss" (and not it's).
In the reward bubble, there should not have been an apostrophe because this is just plural. just plural is just an s. You only have an apostrophe if there is a sense of belonging.
Here this is not case. "Depending on the number of monsters hunted"
Later on, you do the same mistake as at the start with another "it's" when it isn't warranted. "Its outer layer [also I would have used shell here because it fits better] is extremely (no dash here) durable.
Same mistake again: "There is only one site above its joint"
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It's been 84 years. Glad it's back
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The resistances remind me of The Tutorial us Too Hard where MC slits his wrists to gain pain resistance, burns hinself for burn/heat resistance, etc
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Not a fan of the new font of the message windows. The older was much easier to read IMO.
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Thanks for the work and release. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Tutorial area will take a huge amount of bullshit and time it seems.
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When is the chapter coming out 
