Secret Order - Ch. 34

Did we really need this flashback right now? we have hardly known this lady long enough for her to warrant a flashback, even if it involves the Master. Right now he is just a generic mentor figure who died, I would be more invested if the MC's relationship with the Master was explored more before we got this woman's perspective. Also the MC is in the middle of a fight, did you have to shoehorn this flashback here. This kills any kind of tension whatsoever in that fight. I know that Chinese Manhua can take a long time to get going but it is very annoying that rather than developing the story the author keeps cutting to these random fight scenes and interactions between unknown characters over unexplained things. But it doesn't take that much to follow this series so i'll see where it goes.
 

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