Sentouin, Hakenshimasu! - Vol. 1 Ch. 2

[MangaDex]

 

[Aretheus]

Hmmmm...nice pose on page 3. Me likey.

 

[AthalosJ]

Explosion!! Anyone think of Megumin

 

[Solfern]

OH GREAT PENIS FESTIVAL!

 

[Chet31]

Ah, had some decent potential from chapter 1 but this was just a giant mess. To bad.

 

[ChronicleKey]

Women everywhere!! However, I don't particularly have high hope for this story to develop into a harem story.

 

[Dezaki]

combatant mc is a literal idiot now

 

[kronix]

this would be alot better if it had smut tag in it so we could see some fucking... the story is literally trash

 

[Ironclad]

Really struggled with this chapter. Verb tense, possessives, and agreement are all over the place. Very basic grammar mistakes. A proofreader would be nice. Even if the translation was improved though the this chapter was much worse. The introduction of lost tech seems superfluous and really rushed. The pacing is terrible. Combatant #6 has completely forgotten his frustration from the previous chapter. Snow's opinion of our protagonist seems to change every panel. Really nothing like the author's other series.

 

[Hoezell]

Why is so difficult to write penis? Is just a word...

 

[greatninja3]

Former captain be like

"angry aqua noises"

 

[Mitcha]

Do Hadena translate manga now, this shit is not sugoi...

 

[DarkDooM]

Is this a joke translation? This is worse than LHT

 

[Fim]

Second chapter
What this
head hurt
english? no.
good god

Maybe someone who actually knows english should be consulted before releasing something like this. And by consulted I mean he should rewrite the entirety of the translation into something more intelligible.

 

[TAmNi_edbin]

When someone complaint, I could only think of a game that they always blaming a tank or support for everything... Anyways, EXPlOSION is Everyones(?) Favorite quote ?

 

[Sheogorath85]

@DarkDooM, @Fim, welcome to scans done by Loli Mamoritai, who has repeatedly refused people's offers to be editors/proofreaders for his work.

 

[IvoryPuma]

wtf is this translation

 

[Dead-chan]

The language went from bearable to absolute shit.
Not cool, Loli Mamoritai.

 

[JustCallMeDaBoss]

lol wtf is going on

 

[Blue_Eyed_Casval]

God this translation. Such a shame.