Sentouin, Hakenshimasu!

So, is this made directly into manga? I was sure it was a novel when author mentioned it in afterword.
 
Lots of grammar, punctuation, and spelling errors. Needs proofreading.
 
feels like they relied on google translate a bit too much at times, and yes a pr could fix most of errors probably.
 
description: from the author of Konosuba.
Exaustive, we don't need to know anything more
 
Seems pretty boring and uninteresting. None of the characters are particularly compelling, but it's not trashy enough to be enjoyed ironically. Additionally, all those English errors made it harder to digest.
 
@5upr11983, yep this+ mgs survive. Turns out without konosuba trademark parody humor and over the top characters this guy can make just an average and quite boring story.
 

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