Senyuu. - Vol. 5 Ch. 67 - His Story #3: The Reason for His Resolve

Oh boy, I think I know where this is going. Eruba pls don't be like that, it'll only make what's going to happen even worse
 
Thank you so much for picking up the main story!!
Also a little bit of feedback but perhaps the last line of boss!alba could be simplified to just "You dont mind if i use this power to end unhappiness, right?"
But that's just my two cents!
 
@egaeat hey, thank you for the feedback! 👀 I always appreciate it.
I'm not sure which line you're talking about exactly though- could you tell me the page number and panel?
 
@viridiansky Im very glad that you dont mind!
Its the second to last page panel number 2: "Are you fine with that use of that power ending on a sad note?"
 
@egaeat Ah, I see, thank you! Broadly speaking, the line in the Japanese has Boss asking Rchimedes whether he wants to leave his power to wither away unused after leaving behind a legacy of tragedies, rather than seeing it be used for good again by teaching Alba. I couldn't think of a good way to express it naturally in English >.< Does it come off like Boss wants to end unhappiness? That wasn't the intention ;w;
 

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