Serce Mostu - Vol. 1 Ch. 0 - Prologue

[MangaDex]

 

[DANDAN_THE_DANDAN]

Clicked this out of curiosity. Doesn't look interesting.

Artstyle looks stiff, prologue sounds like a generic power-up, RPG-style. Prologues are meant to lure the readers in, this just made me turn away.

 

[Drifter]

From the look of it, I would guess the artist is young. A few more years and a bit of practice in story crafting and she might be ready for prime time.

 

[Nomino]

I like it but the grammar is not all there, its very good for someone`s first manga.
Just keep trying your best and over time you will get better

 

[vDreams]

I'll give it a shot. Seems like a "The Gamer" mixed with "Re:Monster" following.

The art is lacking a little bit, but, it will get better the more you draw/practise (hopefully).

Thank you for the translation.

Edit: I suppose you are the creator, you should try to get this on webtoons also, they should pay you for it.

 

[Varler]

The art could use a bit of work, but it actually looks really interesting! And the action is pretty good, too. It doesn't look robotic, which is a big problem with a lot of newer artists.