Shan Hai Ni Zhan - Ch. 4.3 - The Way Sect (3)

[MangaDex]

 

[ceena]

The art is beautiful of course, but the text boxes are so god awful, it's a significantly better experience just taking in the art panel by panel and ignoring the narration. I don't know if it's actually written like dog shit or if the translation magnifies the clunkiness written in, but it's SO unfortunate either way. I feel like it could be streamlined without losing any meaning, but I guess it's a question of how you feel like things should be translated.

art, etc 12/10
text 0/10, actually better without any text

 

[Kathartes]

@ceena
This series is indeed heavy on narration, but it's the clunky translation make it worse. They almost double the length of each paragraph.