Shi ni Modori, Subete wo Sukuu Tame ni Saikyou he to Itaru - Vol. 2 Ch. 17

The problem with this fight is that the weight it's supposed to have doesn't match the buildup it's gotten. If you need to have a flashback in the middle of your fight in order to explain why the fight is important, then you really screwed up your pacing.
 
MC a few chapters ago: "No, Tina, you cant fight because mages are powerful so they get targeted."
MC now: "TiNa HeLp Me, Im UsElEsS!!!"
 
holy shit that retarded broad literally gave ZERO reason to put up that damn ice rock in between eric and the demon. what the actual fuck??
 
FUCKING HYPED! @dobatag, he literally would've died from the Demon's fire attack, with both her magic and his swordsmanship they could take down the demon without losing a life
 
Can't Tina be poisoned, hurt and bedridden for 4 years? The MC is dumb and boring, with the dumber single dimensional friend the shit get even more boring.
 

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