SHIBUYA: Gal Yuri Anthology - Ch. 5 - Love Rabbits by Neji

Is this a troll translation? I'm not trying to be an asshole, but if it is serious it's horrible, i don't understand anything about the story. The sentences make no sense.
 
@pizza This story takes place over a number of days, and the transitions aren't clearly indicated so some of the dialogue lacks continuity. If you think this is bad, you should witness my first attempt at translating with chapter 1 "Reverse Line".
 

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