Shinozaki-kun no Mente Jijou - Vol. 1 Ch. 1

OK, I'm willing to see more. Thanks for translating and providing notes!
 
This is great! Soo he is kind of like detective uhhh…... what's that cyborg detective cartoon again?
 
Even if the raw says neck, shouldn't you say head? Because he's taking off his entire head not just the neck so saying neck doesn't make sense.
 
A recommendation: If it's "pervert" and "weird" a better replacement would probably be "perverse" instead of fervent. The word perverted originally meant abnormal after all.
 
@Polo
Good catch! The raws say neck for everything, so I thought I changed it all. Seems like I didn't. Should be fixed now!

@Iheart
That's so much better!!!! Thank you!! I've updated the chapter with your correction (+ giving you credit, if you don't mind).
 
@rislence
Ah okay then, you did miss one on page 17 though. Him talking to his mother in a flashback. Besides that one the rest are now head, with obvious exceptions. Thanks for the translation, looking forward to more.
 

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