Shoujo Junrei - Vol. 1 Ch. 9 - Onwards to the Art Exhibition!

Bruh, what with that supernatural atmosphere ? You ain't gonna tell me those shits that happen are pure coincidence.
 
If only there was only some way Mao could communicate that she was the author Shinonome.

Perhaps using language of the verbal variety.

If only there was such a thing that existed.

Anyways, reading this is like watching a train wreck in slow motion. And that editor guy is 100% up to no good.
 
@broadsword80 Did you just read that one chapter without reading anything else before? She doesn't want her to know that she is Shinonome. But she's feeling jealous and scared, that she was almost licking the editor's a**, without knowing him at all beforehand.
 
@Saellanya

But she's also angry that Aiko doesn't know that she's Shinonome.

And the waitress girl from two chapters ago has already laid it out for her. It's not like this is some new development. lol

At this point she only has herself to blame. She is literally angry over something she herself has complete control over.
 
@broadsword80
It seems to me that she's not angry that Aiko doesn't know she's Shinonome. She's angry that Aiko's idealized mental image of Shinonome is more important to her than the real person right in front of her. That her real self is losing out to a fantasy.

'Mao' wants people to appreciate her for who she is, and not build her up to be someone she's not because of her work.
 
Page 2 "hold your horses!"

Page 11 "Why do you keep mumm about your plaan to show here? You couuld have just innformed me in advance" just huh. As well as the obvious mistakes there, there also appear to be half-erased letters in the same sentence, not sure what is going on with that.

Page 17 "I can't bear it any longer!"

I get you're using new people, but it just feels like these chapters aren't being checked after they've been typeset.

Still greatly appreciate the work and chapter.
 
@icekatze I'm thinking that part of it also stems from the fact that the public image of Shinonome is largely fabricated by Maruyama
 
pg 11, top right panel, third speech bubble some part of the text needs fixing.
pg 17, "blonger" -> "longer"
 

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