Thank you for translating this. But I don't understand... You complain in your notes that you were too tired and had some difficulty translating some lines, so why did you bother trying to translate while you were tired? You could've just translated when you were in better conditions, don't you think? I'm not very experienced in translating manga, but it's not like you must translate all pages of a chapter in a single day, take your time and translate 3 or 4 pages per day if you think it's too much of a burden.
@loki266 hey bro I normally only have spare time to translate manga at night just before I sleep as throughout the day I have other commitments like work, school etc
@swiftnissity I completely understand bro... If you can afford it I'd definitely recommend you doing that instead of reading the machine translated version
@Bevinsky firstly I don't think you understand how much effort goes into translating manga... I already sent 8+ hrs of MY SPARE TIME that I could be using for anything else on this version even though it's obviously not perfect but you got to also understand your reading it for free.. But I appreciate the constructive criticism and someone has volunteered to be a proof reader.
Gotta love all the spoiled brat prima donnas in the comments complaining about free stuff instead of, you know, helping to make it better. Thank you, THP, for doing the best you could, don't let it affect your sleep schedule or anything though, health is more important.
@Zypex The whole release is full of spelling and grammar mistakes. What bothers me the most is probably the letter-boxing, especially since all it would have taken to fix is a simple crop on each page. Three of the sides of every image just have white space for no reason.
@GalladeGuy I appreciate the constructive criticism.. If you could dm me and go into further detail with screenshots of the issues that would be very helpful
@the_HENTAI_protagonist I don't really think trying to point out every single spelling and grammar mistake would be helpful, since they're on nearly every page. My advice would be to either just carefully read your translations before posting, or to get a good proofreader.
@the_HENTAI_protagonist For the cropping, you just want to crop out the excess white space on the outsides of the image (the parts where there's no black border on the panels). It looks nicer, the images appear at a more normal size onscreen, and the file size is reduced by a lot. Here's a zip with an example: http://s000.tinyupload.com/index.php?file_id=84693198369122619437
So glad that someone took this over, even if it's possibly not for long!
Also what I assume happened near the end is that he held back his lust and so fourth that happened. ( ex. like the black dragon power taking over because he ain't got enough of his fill: Lust )
I'm only assuming of course.