Solo Bug Player - Ch. 1

[Imlovinit]

I re-read chapter 1 from both teams.
As I wished, Edelgarde improved their work.
Yes, there are some things that can be better, like the date in the beginning (I'm not a native English, I think it is strange to have the date like this), or the office being cleaned but translate as the house, he probably steps recently in the house, not the office. But the chapter is correctly done.
There are sentences that, I think, are more used in these forms than in the Tritinia's.

But, this is for chapter one, I haven't read the following, and the 11 and 12 wasn't good.
I see you go with the name Nasu for this world, okay, it's understandable. But be careful with names, cause Rich Deluc, not working at all. Okay, in Japanese (Korean, I don't know) R is pronounced L, so use Lich.
A Lich can be Rich, but a Rich is rarely a Lich. ^o^
Now you're the team working on this series, I hope you will re-do the chapters 11 and 12, and keep it the way you do here.

 

[SkrillzPlayz]

@imlovinit We never did chapter 11, and chapter 12 is definitively going to be redone as our TL didn't know all the context etc.
And thank you for doing the most constructive criticism/feedback, unlike many others who are just spitting out saliva.

About, "Rich", it might be a mistake, although I didn't spot it in chapter 1... if it's from chapter 12 then yeah it's getting changed.

 

[Imlovinit]

True, it was an other TL that I read for chapter 11 (on an other website). And for the 12, I read it partially (you did write Lich) cause it wasn't the team with I started reading.
I wasn't satisfied, probably because the work was different from what I did know.

Thanks for doing the previous chapters, to make the overall experience more harmonious.

 

[SGR]

@SkrillzPlayz
To be honest, you deserve the shit you get from commenters. Trinitia was doing fine both in quality and in speed, but you decided to just push them out - "coz series popular and muh readership much want". That is bullshit and there's no way around the fact. I dropped this series for the sole reason of you being on it and if you do that kind of shit more and more people will do the same. You'll be left with leeching randoms who don't care and will never consider supporting you in any way.

 

[Wyzarka]

Gonna be honest here, I get that sniping is bad, but based on chapter 1 alone, the quality from Edelgarde is way above Tritinia's.

 

[IronDoge]

"But I died overworking and reincarnated as an obesity young lord named Jared." is not English.

They can fix it if they felt like it.

 

[GrimThoughts]

Well that was a fucking low blow. Tritinia didn’t deserve such a ruthless snipe, at least confer with them beforehand. You do admittedly have a higher production quality than Tritinia, but that doesn’t excuse this unwritten rule of the translation community being broken - at least, in my opinion.

 

[kypoou]

Does he reincarnate in online game world or offline game?

 

[shubh68]

@GrimThoughts
And tritinia was translating 1 chapter a day!! Why snipe them?? For money, ofcourse!!

 

[LunaDW]

The maid gave me a "Valac Clara" vibe for a second.

 

[Nk9bjP4A]

oh no, it's isabella. everyone run away!

Also, what's with the recent flood of fat MC?

 

[Arvadiel]

I - "foolish human, what is it that you want?*
J - "Please succ my fat away"

 

[CalamityCallout]

Hmm I expected him to be corrupt noble but his maid likes him so despite looking rather useless at least he wasnt abusive

 

[pakyu1199]

I thought a beautiful girl would come out man I've been reading a lot of Isekai even though most of them are trash.

 

[Tropingenie]

oh shit HE THICC

 

[lionfromnorth]

She is beautiful.

 

[tianpeng]

Lmao ssr guaranteed from one beginning free draw

 

[dancur]

dying as a virgin gamer while gaming. Man what a way to go

 

[OllyMolly]

He died a shrivelled avid gamer, while his 'character' died being obscenely obese I can bet it was heart attack/failure or something like that. Glad he took over though.

 

[Imkindasad]

reincarnated discord admin