Sono Ossan, Isekai de Nishuume Play wo Mankitsuchuu - Vol. 1 Ch. 5

This chapter is a perfect example of what not to do in storytelling.

Trying to condense several novel chapters in one manga chapter leads to a jumbled mess unless you really know what you're doing.
 
They're doing it in every chapter of this manga. Skipping large chunks of story from the light novel. If they're going to do this horrible a job with the manga, I'm not really sure what their goal is. Thanks for translating it nonetheless.
 
off-screen story : the manga
next chapter the MC gonna get dragoon armor off screen and beat the last boss off screen i guess.
 
why would the guild master go crazy and want to kill of all adventurers? if it was the king i could understand wanting to get rid of such a powerful faction in his kingdom that he has little to no authority over but the guild master is literally based on the adventurers, without them he's fucked
 
@Dragen not just skipping, but cutting large portions and plot lines entirely.

@diablossa : If I recall, his armor is already high end dragon leather, he is using gear appropriate for max level adventurers, Even Luna's knife is extremely high end in the Web novel (he comments it is the 2nd best knife he ever owned, the best being his backup weapon at the time) .

@monkey123 : "Hero" and former party member/apprentice. Part of the MC and Fill's old party from a decade ago.
 
I know they're apparently skipping stuff, but man did he even get a demon sword off-screen too or did I just forget? That's a hell of a thing to randomly say "btw he got a demon sword yesterday" with, especially when it's only a page before you have to use it to kill something.
 
I get that the author wants to introduce a ntr arc, which is always boring, and wants us to dislike leo for being the ntr'ee. But somehow I can only feel that leo is the good guy here, while mc is just stringing fil along as he makes himself a loveless (from his side, fil loves him) harem of her, her sister, the amnesiac wolfgirl, and whoever else he stumbles upon, for pleasure.
 
Wolfgirl huh? Why did this loli wolf demi humon fall from the sky right into MC's arms? For plot's sake I guess! 🙃 Oh wait MC will get into jail, if he dares to...
 
They just compressed an entire arc of the novel into a single manga chapter. At that point they should have just skipped it altogether.
 
I mean, if your gonna skip around so much you could at least take a page or two to summarize what we missed so we aren't completely confused about wtf is happening right?
 

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