Also in the last chapter there are to many time laps going on. They meet when she is 14 and he is 16 then they have the rukus with the families. Then it jumps to him graduating so he has the university exam with 17 or 18? And after that it jumps again to her graduating high school. And then it skips to them having a baby. Clearly to much jumping around, what makes it confusing. Anyway it overcame the highest obstacle, and feels the most rewarding compared to the gamer boy/girl or the author story, even if the problem with the mother never got a resolve.