So the only thing I have a slight issue is the line "Why the hell are you attacking ussss". The emphasis on the S feels off to me and might work better on the U in us. Looking over the rest of the chapter you handled those kind of words well. Also I get peeved over curse words in a young boy's demographic, but since it's not an official translation and used appropriately for the characters that use them then that's fine. Keep up the good work