Soukon no Shoujo to Sourei no Tabi

Reminds me a mixture of how FMA started + Princess Mononoke. What does that mean? :') Looks interesting we'll see how it goes.
 
The setting is interesting, but seems a bit flat, and the artwork is lovely, but so much of the content is rather bland dialogue.
I don't think this will pan out, but I think if this artist teams up with a writer or even just a consultant, it could really turn into a beautiful setting-driven manga, which is something rather rare these days.
 
You know when the mangaka wants to make something special, a masterpiece, and while they can draw well they're just not good enough at writing? It's this here.
 
@KajurN You hit the nail on the head. It just makes me want to read Sunday Without God, which I am absolutely certain this was intended to emulate (same as all the young girl married to demon stories that came off of The Ancient Magus' Bride). I dont think the author even knows what they want to do with the story, there's no clear direction, intent, or even focus.
 
Setting, artwork and characters are great. Character development is also a thing. I'm just worried it might drag on for too long. Ideally it should have been more melancholic, for her to gain permanent injuries in her travel as she reaches her goal. It might bring in too many subplots for it to remain relevant. 7.5/10 - it's well made.
 

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