Split Lover

Man, please never abandon this one, chapters are long so just a few numbers help, but this one is so good I wish we could have them all.
 
Hard to believe this is award winning. Low standards that year I suppose.
 
Ah the good old and hated trope of

the crazy lesbian who always gets away from crimes like attempted murder
 
Me half way through chapter 1: Splitting due to dissatisfaction? Sounds stupid af.
Me after 2 chapters: Omg she is so cute!! I need MO4R!

btw can't they just relieve their dissatisfaction by just going into the shed and touch each other for a bit, meh. These japanese...
 
Hmm... I kinda want a youtube video, on what if splits were real.

Cons
Prisons would be violent 24/7
Hospitals would be violent and depressing 24/7
Suicidical depressive people will become an even more life threatening condition.
More spontaneous crimes in general
(Robberies or Sexual)
Babies will split really damn often

Pros
Counselling would be much easier
Bosses are less likely to be overworking employees or stressing them
Games that require poker faces will become will popular
Everyday News will be really damn funny (Florida man 365 days a year)
 
Whelp, reading the first few chapters this leans towards the silly forced bad jokes category instead of an actual good story.
This is around 5/10. Not good not bad either.
 
Good proposition @Teddy. I too would love to see florida man going global.


Story is kinda meh though, 5.5/10 for me fam
 
I“m with @konzolmester. A really weird, but at least kinda interesting premise, but all the characters are very shallow and seemingly concerned with only their hormones, to create somewhat forced slapstick gags. I think I“ll drop it for now. Maybe I“ll come back later.
 

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