why is he having a hunter teach him how to govern a city? He might as well ask the peasants. Honestly, they are probably a better pick then the hunter since they about city issues.
That outfit seems a bit absurd, doesnt fit that worlds style and stands out, people will think hes nuts. Also his "i am blank name i never tell a lie" line is a bit crap. he should wait until he has done something to earn their trust and then say "have i ever lied to you?", simply stating you never lie seems like a con...