Suginami Toubatsu Koumuin: Dungeon Kinmu no Hitobito - Vol. 1 Ch. 2 - Agreeing to Help

To clarify the message at the beginning of chapter 2, I had these uploaded on bato.to for a while and then moved them here.
 
Ahh... it's a pity, but not reading this. Even the supposed grizzled senior is so juvenile. Seriously, walking around in a known dangerous area with your hands in your pocket? Might as well kill yourself and get it over with.

You guys have fun now.
 
>complaining about shounen esque mc in a shounen series.

Thats like browsing thru a whole section of 18+ manga and complain that you cant find a book title'd 'an introduction to algebra'.
 
@GottaGoFes
can you double check the translation for page 9? Did he really say this is my girlfriend?
The conversation later dont seem to line up.

"This is my girlfriend" = これは私のガールフレンドである. (I used google translate so I maybe wrong)

The manga dont use 私 in their conversation huh, then I could very well be wrong.

Sorry to bother you if this is wrong.
 
Think it was 2 page because it from the digital one. So technically it follows what normally japanese manga website style
 
"This is my girlfriend' is probably wrong. It's more like, "Since she is here now...".

It also doesn't make sense for "kanojo" to be "girlfriend" in this context especially with the lack of reaction to the age gap and immorality of it.

@wakato9086
The raws used the word "kanojo", which is usually used as like a pronoun, but can also mean "girlfriend"

The "I" word here is probably "uchi", which can also mean "home". In this context, it probably means the district.
 
Appreciate all the feedback big-time, my Japanese is super imperfected so there's probably a lot more errors, again I apologize. I'm especially worried about the page talking about the king. If I ever do chapter 3 your feedback is super useful. As for the page format, I apologize it will most likely continue to be this way unless someone else picks up the series.
 
@GottaGoFes
i really suggest you to upload in single page rather than double.
its much flexible in single page format, and you dont have to worry how it gonna look in every site reader.
and also since here there're 3 mode of reading, so reader can choose for them self~
And cropping not something that hard to do, so it will be win2 for both of us~

btw, you did a good job in typesetting
thank you for your works~!
 
Wow, weapon shop was full of garbage. He better off with his original warhammer.
 
Ah yes, the OT3. I say without knowing much about them besides seeing fanart on Pixiv and stuff
 
I feel like the "This is my girlfriend" line is a mistranslation. Also, could you possibly split the pages into individual ones instead of double spreads?

Anyway, thanks a bunch for translating! :)
 

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