Summer Breeze - Ch. 3 - The Third Day

This is really interesting. The storytelling flows nicely and I'm curious how the story goes from here. Thank you for picking this up Acme Scans!
 
Nooooooooo.

Don't stop.

So good.

Thank you.

I'm looking forward to reading more.
 
Just for the record, a McGuffin isn't an effect, it's a thing. "The McGuffin is the thing that the villains are after, but the audience doesn't care"--Hitchcock
 

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