For a romance that didn't even have a strong base, quite brave of the mangaka to introduce rivals...and worse yet, rivals more interesting than the ML. I don't have second lead syndrome (so far) but Hitomi is kinda sorta getting more backstory and the mere fact that he was forced to act like a girl his entire life plus we don't understand his powers. He also has a more interesting "underdog" personality. Then there's Elios. I felt like he was going to get fleshed out, along with Hitomi, but no, he was quite literally removed from the story and replaced with someone else. And then this other dude doesn't really seem to have a personality besides being different from Elios. While I'm at it, I'm kinda angry that our protagonist had to admit to herself (very briefly) that she liked Elios. She is admitting this while going down another route with another guy. It's an example of telling and not showing and you know what? I think that this story is gonna be a lot of telling and not showing from now on. What else do I not like? Oh yes the art proportions are very off sometimes and that makes me sad

. Yeah that's it. I got it all out of my system.