Tearmoon Empire - Vol. 1 Ch. 4

The narrator feels like a fellow reader that's like "wow, they're praising her even though it was only for herself, lol"
I like Narrator-san which is basically Author-san
I love them both

at this point everyone's gonna have
 
Her counting the dessert to give to Anne's family is just like how I count my curry puff and decide not to give it to others because then I'd only have one to myself, only to end up eating one and losing the rest of it because i left it in a bus :')
 
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>“thusly”
Dropped.
 
Hmm, one wrong misstep with her spouting future knowledge and we'll end up hearing "She's a witch! Burn her!"
 
That part with the book was super fucking suspisious.....
But on the other hand who would actually believe a sickly girl and a maid.
 
There's a typo on pg. 26. The prince is described here as effable instead of affable. While both words come from the Latin faris, affable means "delightful" while effable is "expressionable through words". And since I'm sure it's a typo I thought I should point it out in case you will ever want to re-release this chapter.
 
I love the commentary in the manga. "This is our female lead, she sucks, but for some reason is getting a redemption(?) story anyways."
 
I love how she now has her own court author writing propaganda about herself. Gotta promote your name so people don't chop your head off.
 
actually she's the same as those nobles
the difference is she's the MC and victim while those nobles are all traitor (most nobles only think of themself, only rarely or some 1-2 generation are actually loyal)
 
actually she's the same as those nobles
the difference is she's the MC and victim while those nobles are all traitor (most nobles only think of themself, only rarely or some 1-2 generation are actually loyal)

btw arent that guy the one who killed her?
i bet he's some goody 2 shoe, or some kind of medieval SJW
 

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