Tensei Akujo no Kuro Rekishi - Vol. 1 Ch. 2 - Death Flag 2

[kyoya66]

In two word shoujo manga, if anyone don't like shoujo manga please don't complain

 

[poobpoob]

Part of me wants to hate this, but it's also interesting to see an author learn a lesson firsthand about why Mary Sues are garbage.

 

[LuminousAzael]

Idk but I’m really invested in this one

 

[TaengManok]

Where do I read the raws for free pls-- someone message me or something.

I found raws but I need yen/real money and I'm poor.

 

[Eevee3]

This is so addicting. Thank you for translating!

 

[Meo]

Sol's the only one to seem to differ from her story. When everyone was obsess if Konoha was OK, he alone realized she was injured.

Man...reminds me that my friend and I use to exchange writing journals in junior high (and yes, it was totally Mary Sue).

 

[HorikitaManabuIsNotMadeOfIce]

shit.

 

[LotsOfSodaLove]

jesus christ girl, what kinda fucked up wattpad story were you writing for yourself?

 

[pandamom84]

this is not my cup of tea.... like what kind of person who wrote a story that represented herself as heroine, but always put a danger to mc chara..

 

[iridescine]

LOL I LOVE THIS. So the ML is the butler and I love me sum tsundere bois, cant say this often enough tbfh. I like how Konoha is pure af and just going about life in her Mary Sueness, like she’s not secretly plotting the FL’s demise, and her love interest still only has eyes for her! Yay! Fingers crossed it wont be a love triangle.

This is like every former teen writer’s worst nightmare and I adore that she is repenting by trying to save Konoha from her crappy plot. And even when she’s injured she cant help but admire her own characters. Truly an author’s selfless love! Tryna protect her babies~

 

[Flyingpantsu]

She threw a simple twig and it shook the beast's head...

Also, Konoha didn't seem too concerned with her sister that was sent flying when the beast fled even though she shielded her with her body...

 

[_twxx99]

Konoha didn't give a fuck about her sister when she got rescued, she simply was flirting with her sister's fiance. wow.

 

[kwendy]

Should have made separate story with all explicit events. Then again, to be reincarnated there would be a disaster. Grimdark interesting to read disaster.
@_twxx99 Somehow does not make any sense since Konoha shown more interest in Iana then that dude thus far.

 

[ALacie]

Oh my God I love how they even mentioned that these dark events are partly fueled by the repressed sexuality of female middle schoolers. Amazing.

 

[AiriAi]

I'm so done, the 'heroine' is not strong, is just stupid, and the fantasy of a honey teenager full of insecurities. She's also not kind, she was all stupidly flirting with her little sister's stanched fiance. I felt so bad when she was bleeding and nobody cared about her and it also angers me how she needs to be responsible for protecting her stupid and selfish sister just to not die but ok, geez.

 

[Shortnime]

While most people would dislike Konoha's character, I love how the author portrays her perfectly as the typical mary sue wattpad-ish 3rd rate shoujo manga heroine; extremely dense, kind to everyone, head full of romance, constantly getting herself into danger for the bois to save her later, and has godly power that only appears when it's convenient. Her character serves as a great contrast to Iana's level-headed personality. This also makes Iana's sacrifices and actions more impactful as the story goes.

 

[roxanneayy]

I enjoy the backstory of how she wrote her story. I think I look forward to that the most. Lol She criticizes her youth along the way too which is funny.

 

[HotGirlShi]

bruh, why don't she just leave??? She got the money to. Don't even bother with these stuuuuff

 

[sugarcake]

everyone hating but when i was 13 this was the exact sh*t i ate up LMFAO mary sues were >>>

 

[sellmeformoney]

holy fuck