i thought that the story would heavily focus on the relationship between Ichinose and the girl but besides the first chapter we don't see any interaction between the two of them until the last chapter, i was really interested to see what kind of personality and development she will have, but we saw almost nothing, i also feel like the "arcs"of the rest of the characters could have been longer and that some of these arcs where rushed, they somehow feel incomplete. Having said that i can say with confidence that i really like this manga, because it somehow feels real, it doesn't have that over the top drama that a lot of manga like this try to show at the end of every volume, and because of that this manga feels a little more authentic.