@SoloSera This is when she fell in love
Chapter 3.1:
She thought she was so plain that the king thought she was just a maid, but when he saw through her facade they both fell in love with each other at first sight.
This reads like a stroke. I like the general story line, but the dialogue felt extremely disjointed and rapid, like half of the pages had been cut out without my knowledge.
I like to get my dose of romance, but I like some TASTEFUL romance. This ain’t it chief. We ourselves, as readers, have no idea what this prince is like as a person, yet the MC and the prince fall in love after one meeting? The development in their romance flew way over my head. This is a drop from me.
when did they fall in love? o-o did I miss a volume or two?
I really like our FL but the romance is far too quick for my taste. At least have them meet more before that!
did we likeee miss pages or something because it’s starting to feel realllyyyy rushed. I swear she wasn’t lookin for love and now she’s all whenever the king is spoken about