The Beginning After the End

@logos
1.
i dont really remember the answer to that question, its been a couple months since i read the novel
2.
Yes, there is an explanation to that one, but i would be revealing all the story if i told you how it works that way
 
Bonsoir @tindriin
Les chapitres ont été supprimés suite à un licenciement de la part de DELITOON.

@guitoric
Not a translation, the original is the english one.
 
Il casse les couille delitoon
bon plus qua aller payer pour lire chez eu ptn mais vraiment fait chier
 
Tis' a mediocre story. It started off strong with its twist on the done-to-death reincarnation genre, but a lot of issues arise from bad writing and storytelling.
For one, his former identity as King Grey receives very little attention throughout the story to the point it's hard to believe he was once a near-40-year-old. Its reminders that, "He has poor social skills because of his previous life," and, "I can't be complacent now that I'm stronger than my past life," are so bloody annoying by the 100th time you read it. Yet, why this is the case is never elaborated. Most of the story is wasted on training and fighting montages, leaving a 10% remainder to detail side-quests, forced feel-bad moments, and flirting with Tessia.
 
@skeletor51
Currently reading the novel and up to chapter 230.
His identity as Grey is explored greatly in the novel to a maybe annoying degree, we get some intervals from his past in the novel chapters from time to time and some of them reflect his current life.
I would say this started out generic and has become a really good read.
There is a lot of flirting with Tess though, not that I mind with how dark some chapters of the novels are.
I actually get impatient when something is happening and I see that the current paragraphs are in Grey's pov, which after reading all that, Arthur wakes up, he usually dreams these memories of the past.
Not sure if you read the novel, maybe I am biased, but I like everything about this one.
I am not sure if I expressed myself well, I am trying not to spoil what is to come.
I actually miss these chapters after almost catching up to the novel.
 
@Mizumachi
I read up to 2/3 of the current story (as of August 3rd, 2020). It's annoying to so suddenly bring up his backstory when you're three-novels-worth-in-words deep into the story without coaxing it first. It's like you're talking to a colleague and they suddenly drop their entire life story on you. That's bad writing.
 
@zoombeedoo There's no English translation because the original language is English, and the author prohibits those from being uploaded here. You may find them on another site, or pay to read the web comic on the official site.
 
@skeletor51
They don't just suddenly dump the whole thing on you.
I disagree with it being bad writing. The story doesn't have to feed you answer whenever you want them.
Let's agree to disagree.
You reading the novel or webtoon though?
What do you mean by coaxing it first though?
I wouldn't say it is prefect writing but calling it bad writing is too much.
 

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