The Blade of Evolution Walking Alone In The Dungeon - Ch. 14

this 'author' is trying entirely too hard to make a cool story. Also, he is missing the cool mark by a mile.
 
I've gotten pretty used to these manwhas being extremely slow paced, but I think this one is setting a new record. I genuinely think it would be a overall fairly interesting series if the author/artist made each chapter more story dense and didn't spend a quarter of their chapter to have one character say "okay".
 
The start was nice but now...eh...I'm losing interest for some reason.
 
The art are gold but story are bronze... will be evolve? Who knows...bookmarked!
 

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