The writing is unholy bad levels of pacing. Story itself is pretty good, the execution is just terrible. The art is really good and composition is very well done too. The small scene's in themselves are also great. It's just how they knit together, the bad sense of flow and the shortness of the scene's that makes it impossible to take it as seriously as it takes itself.
All in all this comic is a bucnh of 0's and 10`s combined making me love and hate it all at once.