The Demon King Who Lost His Job - Ch. 0 - Prologue

Damn, What a first chapter. I feel robbed of info but fuck it apparently im stupid simple. I look forward to more.
 
Fuckable FMC, MC not a beta yet... Good 1st chapter.

I dont get the last page reference though ;(
 
So hes going to rape her next chapter ?

Looks kinda stupid tho. Very little substance. And thats a demon king ? where the fuck is his horns ? He should somewhat look like a demon, isnt that obvious ? Not some prince charming bishie. Fail grade so far.
 
@Velsy
read the tags ! "sexual violence" ? if it is not there, there is no rape
he has orange eyes (or red in the book cover), is not enough for you?
moreover why it would be ugly?
in general, the stronger a demon the more he looks like a human.
What is this story about horns? a demon does not always have horns,
it depends on the religions and why the sacred texts would be right on the physics of the demons?

but I agree there is not much in this "prologue" it is to ask if the authors do not compete with those who shows the least, while normally they show too much to attract readers
 
and i hate this already lol. i already know this genre isn't my cup of tea but i was curious anyway
 

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