The Fate of the Returned Hero - Vol. 1 Ch. 3 - The Hero's Incident

@marianolinx : non a loli, description (from manga publisher's series info page) is clear that the dragon is
An old-fashioned beauty
 
This is a different taste of isekai and I'm loving it. Truly fuc-KING worth to read.
 
I am aware that people might press s instead of d, but I was unawares that unawared could pass by this quality of translation...
 
Author Note :

 I originally planned for Ayane to be a cool career woman, but for some reason she turned out to be a perverted M woman.

 Why did this happen?

 It’s Like. Is the protagonist’s chastity in trouble?
 
>Characters says MC is ripped.
>he's just a skinny twink

Jap mangakas can you draw an actual ripped MC for once?
 
A curse where he gets diarrhea every time he's aroused is just going to make him develop a weird fetish.
 
"why having a photoshoot instead of callign for help" well now they can't even call emergency services
 
How did Akane manage to see that light while the friend didn’t because of the “crowd”? They were together and I’m sure they’d be looking at the victim intently but somehow only Akane saw it? Furthermore any normal person would ignore it and think their eyes were playing tricks on them. I feel a lot of the reactions are dramatized.

Also the MC saves damsel in distress happened for two chapters in a row, to make MC look “Cool”? I already thought the MC would look cool by being himself. After all people who are skilled tend to look cool by doing their normal daily routine.

I’m surprised MC doesn’t have ptsd, maybe he has a mental buff skill? Any normal person from a peaceful era would have ptsd after having to kill so many times. I hope this gets explained. Having a small arc of how he overcame would make for an excellent read, if it’s well executed.

It’s not bad and I hope it will improve as the story progresses. It has a lot of potential. I’m only questioning/critiquing. I hope this helps. If you’re really curious about the human mind I suggest watching Hannibal.
 

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