@HDMI1 Haha nice joke, but yeah no, it's still grammatically incorrect. If it said "Seasoned adventurers can't communicate properly, so they don't form parties often" or something, it would make sense, but it would still be wrong since the raw doesn't say that.
MC just goes with a flow. Oh I went to a different world, there is girl next to me that seems to expected me to be here, she is naked. Oh well, let's ignore that. Writing is confusing. MC has an amnesia yet doesn't have it.
Anyway, art is quite average. Story is bad. Dialog is horrible. Characters not really that logical. So can't really rate it above 4.