The Library Needs a Witch - Ch. 11

A flashback during a flashback. Nice

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the reasoning is faulty to the point where is cant hold any water...
why ? because she uses only one track if reasoning...
just for example it could also mean that they are desperate for instance and there are at least two types of desperate meaning there isnt just one possebility
i could write a long essay about the inference she should have drawn from this letter but i wont because the style seems lazy and so im also lazy
 
Flashbackception...
I already found the 1st flashback bothersome. It's too soon, we're just at the beginning and we (or at least I) want to see more of the current plot. I want the MC to meet the prince and interact with the knight again.
Instead we get that 2nd flashback about her past but the timing isn't right for that.
 

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