The NPCs in this Village Sim Game Must Be Real! - Vol. 1 Ch. 2.2

[thedestroyership]

wow the character development is quite subtle

 

[CyanHide]

...

I think I’m gonna cry as this story progresses

 

[vodkavodka]

When you start thinking MC is pathetic but bearable, the author is like 'wait, I haven't showed everything yet!'

 

[Solipsist]

Yeah, this is where I'm going to stop.
Not only was it not necessary for the MC to be this pitiful, if he's THAT pitiful, it just creates a whole new annoying spin on his immediate environment. To make a long story short, if someone had an obviously shitty life, which makes it incredibly easy to understand what's stopping them from being "normal"....The mother at the start of the story, should REALLY not be going around nagging him to "be normal, look at your neighbors, they're normal!"
Now...Why am I thinking about the MC's family, when I'm supposed to think about him, and especially, the game? Why is it so needlessly unfocused?
Mhm. <_<

While these things can happen, I can't see why anyone would think that'd make for an entertaining story. This is just trying to be as needlessly sad and unfocused as it possibly can. Discovery writing at its finest.

 

[theloginsneversave]

Why the fuck did they translate it to reddit?
@Solipsist
OF COURSE THE MOTHER SHOULD BE NAGGING HIM, IF NOT DOING MORE, IT'S BEEN TEN. FUCKING. YEARS. since he graduated from uni. One traumatic incident where he was stabbed in the stomach doesn't justify all that time spent doing nothing. And you thinking about the MC's family instead of him just means you have problems following a story, rather than the story being bad.

So, to make a long story short: You suck dick :^)

 

[Solipsist]

@theloginsneversave
I'm sorry that you had a bad day, but do try to be less of a tit, and maybe people would genuinely reply back to you.

 

[talisay999]

this is fucking depression

 

[theloginsneversave]

@Solipsist
It's rather unfortunate that you can't properly reply to criticism, and instead can only strawman arguments. At least try to form a semblance of a response instead of redirecting your words to a different topic.

 

[Prosopeio]

He should ask anon

 

[Silwith]

Wait wait wait wait wait... does that mean that he left his sister there and ran? Because if, then he is real trash... even if the sister is alive after that, i mean, being stabbed must be horrible, but i would literally die any possible way to save my sister and he just runs? ...

 

[Goldenzeal]

@Silwith

Spoiler

Yes he left her when he ran away, it says so in the next chapter ,but IIRC he did so to get the cops in a atempt to try and save her ( something he actually managed to do )
The person who stabbed him were a stalker of his sister so he assumed he would not harm her.
This is going to be explained more later on in the story.

 

[SunderMInd]

 

[summers]

If he could have run away with a stab wound, then the sister could have done so as well.

 

[nonexistent696969]

lmao i thought he sold his kidney

 

[Ashisu]

@summers truuueee, i feel like yelling for her to come with is all you owe her there

 

[YungMassah]

Nigga really just dipped on his sister like that

 

[Podi125]

Come on, the stab wound was about an inch deep through your intestine. You coulda beat that skinny nigga's ass.

 

[deathpad]

This getting dark so fast. Especially

Spoiler

THE PAYMENT SYSTEM

 

[1059212]

@silwith The dude got stabbed. He felt his life was in danger. It's the sisters fault for not being able to keep up with him despite being uninjured.

 

[kyself]

Typical r*dditor.