The Secret Buried Within
- Thread starter MangaDex
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This is an interesting story!
Although, you might want to proof read some of the sentences/words, such as:
"Is that is the case..." would need to be changed to "If that is the case..." and others like at the beginning, when the dream boyfriend says "Your bangs are way too think," should be changed from think to thick.
Another point, which is really just a personal preference, is that when you have questions shouted, e.g "Why didn't you heart my posts!" I'd put a question mark to frame it more as a question, rather than a statement; "Why didn't you heart my posts?!"
But, thank you for translating this! It's an intriguing plot so far.
Although, you might want to proof read some of the sentences/words, such as:
"Is that is the case..." would need to be changed to "If that is the case..." and others like at the beginning, when the dream boyfriend says "Your bangs are way too think," should be changed from think to thick.
Another point, which is really just a personal preference, is that when you have questions shouted, e.g "Why didn't you heart my posts!" I'd put a question mark to frame it more as a question, rather than a statement; "Why didn't you heart my posts?!"
But, thank you for translating this! It's an intriguing plot so far.
ShinomiyaRyo
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shall change the errors very soon!
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@kabeidon_ wgo are you talking about
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Omg I love this.I really like how it protrays growth in the mc from when she was in middle school to high school.By the way REVENGE IS FRICKING TOXIC.can't that women see that the mc has changed so get a life.
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More like The Secret Buried Without 
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The only names and face I can remember in this serious is youyou and her brother and XiaoShu
