The Sloppy Woman - Oneshot

That third girl was a bit unnecessary, but this was pretty good all around.
 
Yes, it's very important to be amazing at an office job that will soon be replaced with machines entirely and totally not at the little things that make life worth living, like cooking a decent meal or living in a household that you find comfortable and appealing...
 
What was the point of bringing the other girl back and telling us that Hijiri was some kind of bitch? It was really great though, but what a waste,..
 
Menn the author shouldn't have introduced the otjer friend.... It ruined everything. It just shows that this will not be a serious relationship and she just pleasures women
 
Was a cute story till we found out Hijiri just kind of floats from woman to woman
 

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