in less than a chapter beings that dont consider themselves humans and superior go from seeing a human as food and livestock/pets to seeing him as a partner
thats just not happening...
im not against a convenient plot made up out of pure luck but within reason and changing the mindset and bias of a group definetly takes more than a single day
even if you hypnotize people to quit smoking it takes more than a single session not to mention bias or mindset
It's okay-ish, but the pacing kinda sucks and it seems like something, that might run out of ideas too soon. Author not having anything solid before is not consoling either.