The Tyrant's First Love

It was good at the start and then everything kinda mellowed into predictable and meh, mediocre at best. Anyway If you have absolutely nothing else to read right now then sure, pick this up.
 
@ephemeralrain your upload was empty, if you're on a mac get rid of the hidden macosx folder, and make sure the zip has images
 
Art is good, but pacing is a little too fast. Plot bombs here and there without much foreshadowing about it before hand.
Tia's personality is a little unclear, she adopts subservience and willfulness (boldness) at the same time, contradictory, but playfullness and coolness can co-exist.
 

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