At least this one wasn't just randomly in the middle of the chapter, though I thought for a second it was going to be XD But I can tell what they were trying to do, at least.
...Still, the importance of a few dramatic narrator-ish lines and, say, a pull-back shot of the environs or two, when jumping several years, cannot be understated. This feels like aging six years mid-paragraph. ~w~;
it doesnt sit well with me that he has her life in his hands,if i read correctly she should have trained for those 200 years so that even if he was to rebel against her shell be able to handle him easily