The Tyrant's Guardian Is an Evil Witch - Ch. 18

The birthday scene was so precious <3
Now he's a teenager, and maybe now with puberty, he'll start to "feel" things...
 
;....; she should've thanked the tree too... and maybe left the flower there.... (why the hell did she take it?)
 
AAAAHHHH, a time lapse😀
Yohoooo!!!! I thank u berry much Parody Scans~
 
God shes so beautiful.... also IM NOT READY FOR THIS TIME SKIP BUT IM ALSO??? REALLY READY???
 
Damn, hit by that 6 year time skip.

It was a touching moment and the transition to the skip was smooth.
 
This genre and it's time-skips-outta-nowhere...

At least this one wasn't just randomly in the middle of the chapter, though I thought for a second it was going to be XD But I can tell what they were trying to do, at least.

...Still, the importance of a few dramatic narrator-ish lines and, say, a pull-back shot of the environs or two, when jumping several years, cannot be understated. This feels like aging six years mid-paragraph. ~w~;
 
it doesnt sit well with me that he has her life in his hands,if i read correctly she should have trained for those 200 years so that even if he was to rebel against her shell be able to handle him easily
 

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