People on this site will tell you your mistakes not to mock you, but simply to help you grow. I find it's nice to encourage people to call me out on the things I translate so that I can do better and make the series more enjoyable for those reading it.
I like the rejection of the cigarette. When you become a parents aspects of your health suddenly become much more important. Even if he didnt admit it hes clearly already made that committment.
It's a good thing we know for a fact that they'll still be living together safe and sound many years later huh.
I'm also glad to see Lil Potato with Grey Weirdo, been thinking those two would totally get along lol.