There Is No Way a Pretty Virtual Girl Is a Girl!

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That was... A bit odd. Wouldn't it have made more sense if they
just became friends? Neither of them is gay, so wanting to date immediately is so out of nowhere! They can still become more later on...
pity, the art is quite pretty after all!
 
Awww!~~ I could definately see a continuation to this! Its written really well despite how rushed it is :) Its got potential!
 
This feels like it needs to be just a bit longer to actually sell us on it, but while it's rough, it works. But as it is, whether it feels cheap and unconvincing, or whether it feels genuine, sort of seems to depend on what you read between the lines about why they react how they do.

(I sort of feel like BL can get a lot of free mileage for starting with a feeling of realism with this premise, incidentally. Like, this is who you'd expect to show up at this meeting, statistically speaking. At least for a lot of games.)
 
I wish there was more but this was made years ago so chances are it will stay a one shot unless someone serialised it or offered a lot of money
 

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