To Be Ordinary! - Ch. 57

just after a character developing scene, you had to add "Why did you hug me a moment before?"

Seriously !!
I get it you wanna make the hero look badass, but this just ruins the whole thing, because the conversation in the previous chapter now carries no weight, it just meant nothing
*sigh*
 
@The_Look_Of_Disapproval do you understand why this cliche is used? I mean you seen other romance stories right?

This is also character development. She got pissed, she prob never got pissed before for seeing another girl hugging "her man" so to speak. Now she gonna go through all those emotions and then the misunderstanding is going to get clear and then probably they gonna fuck hard after making up of course.
 
Good ol' trolling older brother.

Man who knows exactly what's going on, but incites the wrong ideas even further.
 

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