Todo no Tsumari no Uchouten - Vol. 2 Ch. 14

Go and read the other version guys , it explains things a lot more better and it has some good drama in it , this one feels like the manga got axed (not trying to diss it) and there's not enough reason for nekozaki low self esteem and the other girls relationships are explained better
 
Yeah, you really ge t the feel that it was forced to be ended. Luckily we had Come Rain or Shine. Thanks for finishing this one.
 
Aww so close but no kiss for the ending. :( I really enjoyed this, It is a shame this is the end already...
Well at least we still have Come Rain or Shine.

Thanks for the translations so everyone can finish enjoying this version! 😊
 
iirc this version didn't really get axed, but author decided to end it because of changes in the magazine (i think the magazine went full porn or more ero content lol)

thanks for translating it until the end, back then i was only to find until chapter 12 or so in raws
 
tbh i really liked this version coz it's calmer but well life needs drama ig lol
 
@Elma_ I think a terrible home life is a good *enough* reason to have low self-esteem (if your parents aren't giving you the time of day, who does care about you?) but the second version has a *better* reason if it gets explained properly (the setup is a doozy).
 
Thanks for the translations. I love Arata Iri.
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i wonder why this ended how it did--and also why it was rebooted in the first place..oh well. we'll just continue with the other then.

thx for the translations
 
Don't worry, that alternate universe is still ongoing. We'll definitely get the kiss there.
 
Lifted my old comment elsewhere, for everyone who wonders why this story was cut short: "Todo no Tsumari no Uchouten" was published in the magazine Young Comic, which switched to accommodating more 18+ contents, so Arata Iri decided to stop putting this cute story there, but couldn't get a publishing deal for continuation elsewhere, so it got cut short. A few years down the line, Arata Iri decided to reboot it altogether, with a more dramatic storyline, thus "Come Rain or Shine" was born and currently being published in Dengeki Daioh.
 
Wait, damn. I was reading the past 10 chapters thinking this WAS the reboot. No wonder some of it felt odd.
 
This is such a unfinished ending really. Read the author's alternate work instead, cuz that one is the renewed version of this
 

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