Tokage

Love this manga. Always wished it had a film or anime adaptation.
 
This was actually really good and just the right length. Nice ending too. Glad I found this. ?
 
It feels lacking to me. I think it could've gone for another 3 or 5 chapters to help make things not so rushed. I also find the boy in this to be quite obnoxious. I'd rather have the ending be the MC finally dying and the sister coming back to life. I just feel it'd work better for me. The ending is a bit confusing and I feel like the MC not achieving his goal of dying makes the rest of the story a bit pointless.

Hell, I think it would've been better for the story to be about the MC and the original girl's spirit as they go through time. I even think it'd be better if the story was just a Shoujo Ai/Yuri between the MC in this body and the business chick as there does seem to be some tension there.
 
It was okay. I feel like the pacing was totally fucked and that it simultaneously had too little detail and too much.
 

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