Tomoshibi scan

Do you need help with proofreading? The grammar is a bit off and there is a couple of missing words for some panels for Valhalla
 
Wow, this group is so good!

Also, don’t listen to the purists who get triggered over the embellished translations because they think scanlations should 100% follow the raws. As long as you’re not ruining the flow, you’re not hurting anyone with your translation style.

Thanks for all your hard work.
 
If you really want to improve, look into removing your meme text. It is literally breaking the flow of the manga, because a translation should be consistent to the language.

I wonder how young one must be to find this kind of translation acceptable.
 

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